'DISGUSTING' - A 1* review that's a badge of honour 🤣 for 'Beta SEX Love SOUNDS'

MH Macdonald

My kink: slow, slippery, unfinished hand-jobs...
Feb 5, 2022
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This 1* / one word: 'DISGUSTING' Amazon review made my day! 🤣

I'm not quite sure why 'John from Canada' was reading my keyholder / cfnm erotica but he clearly doesn't approve of the mortifying humiliations and desperate denial I have foofoo endure.

And I assume he must have skipped through my warning: Frequently disciplined, humiliated and laughed at, his Mistress enjoying his crushing shame every time he meets her friends, under the control of his betters, taken further than he’d ever imagined he could go… these vignettes into his ongoing plight, of living under the yoke of strict, hardcore tease and denial, contain scenes of pitiless female domination and BDSM sexuality within a Female Led service orientated relationship. Please do not read of you are liable to be offended by such material. Adult readers only - unsuitable for under 18s, alpha-males and anyone who struggles with the principle: ‘Real Women Don’t Do Housework.’

Welcome to the Femdom Frolics that 'John from Canada' where one male sub lives out his 'happy ever after' daily life of grime. Kept nude in chastity as a domesticated servant, he's worked, teased, ridiculed and flaunted... in the on-going series that sees him put through the wringer of extremely mortifying sph, shockingly unfair denial and vile punishments that demand respect and get results... his latest trials and tribulations published in:
Beta SEX Love SOUNDS:
This is the one... where Verity, foofoo's crush, puts him through a mortifying CFnm Q&A experience of having to show her his cumface, sharing what he has to say when he is permitted a rare orgasm, faking a tantrum and making his beta sex love sounds while sniffing her bare feet - in this process gifting him the greatest afternoon of his life so far, She does it all, as a prelude to the prick-teasing summer she has planned for him, where using Pavlovian Femdom-style conditioning, she intends to prime him sexually to the scent of her feet and socks...
Let's just say Cinderella had it far easier… and as for foofoo, well he's found his 'happy ever after' in a Female Led household, where his trials & tribulations are legion... (50,000+ words)

Series Synopsis:
In a nutshell, my eBooks are vignettes within an on-going story arc of female domination and chaste male submission, where I indulge myself in the irony of playing around with and inverting sexist stereotypical proverbs or idioms related to gender roles, imposed by patriarchal societies around domestic tasks and so-called "womanly duties."

Some more satisfied comments from readers:
  • '"Your word crafted imagination is digital beta Viagra!' (FetLife)
  • 'Wonderfully written stories. Forget the cliche of leather clad dommes with whips, the domestic servitude of foofoo is much crueler. Intense chastity frustration, mockery and non stop chores are the order of the day.' (UK Amazon)
  • 'This is another great installment of this wonderful truly ruthless and beautiful FLR-storyline.' (Germany Amazon)
  • 'Fun read, very detailed cruel femdom.' (USA Amazon)
  • 'Loved this story the humiliation is always top notch.' (USA Amazon)
  • 'The scene on the sofa with Mistress and Her slave is hands down one of the best i've ever read!.' (UK Amazon)

The 20+ ebooks in the ‘Modern Day Cinders’ series are available for the free Kindle App for all iOS & Android devices on Amazon @ https://amazon.com/author/mhmacdonald
 
I love reading reviews of erotic literature, it makes me wonder sometimes what on Earth the reviewer thought they were reading or why they didn’t just return the book for a refund. I am reading James Hardcourts books (husband of Jane, @keephimcaged ) and one reviewer of his Friends with Kinky benefits books claimed the reason they didn’t like the story was the characters were immature. That is the entire point! They are learning about sex, and are still very young. I thought the story was extremely arousing, but my wish has always been to have discovered chastity when I was that age, rather than in my 40s.
 
Ooh a series of new ebooks to read in bed!

@MH Macdonald - Which book would you recommend for someone who likes Gynarchic worldbuilding or which is a starting point for any of your long running series, many thanks.

Goddess Jade.
 
Ooh a series of new ebooks to read in bed!

@MH Macdonald - Which book would you recommend for someone who likes Gynarchic worldbuilding or which is a starting point for any of your long running series, many thanks.

Goddess Jade.
:)
Probably, for starters, 'Mother Nature is a FEMDOM Humiliatrix' should give you a good idea of his 'happy-ever-after' in a CFnm environment of merciless key-holding domestic tyranny, and then go from there. The story arc has evolved as I have got going, since 2019, but each books is a specific vignette, so self contained bar the events of 'Dirty Weekend' which lead directly into 'Lie back and think of England...'
Enjoy your bedtime reading.
MH
 
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I love reading reviews of erotic literature, it makes me wonder sometimes what on Earth the reviewer thought they were reading or why they didn’t just return the book for a refund. I am reading James Hardcourts books (husband of Jane, @keephimcaged ) and one reviewer of his Friends with Kinky benefits books claimed the reason they didn’t like the story was the characters were immature. That is the entire point! They are learning about sex, and are still very young. I thought the story was extremely arousing, but my wish has always been to have discovered chastity when I was that age, rather than in my 40s.
Indeed, given the book title, the book cover and the advance Reader Warning of 'Like Coca-Cola recommend a Coke is 'best served chilled' I always recommend my eBooks are 'best read locked' for unsupervised UXOs and male subs 😉' I always give, it reminds of our recent PM who during Covid claimed he was 'surprised by cake' when caught out breaking lock down rules.
 
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